My First Poetry

I still remember it like it was yesterday. It was back when I was in Grade 5. I was crazy and in love back then. Yes, I was a cheesy guy (well,until now actually). But hey, who doesn’t do crazy stuff when in love?


I wrote her a poetry describing how crazy I was going back then. And being the “torpe” kind of guy I am, she doesn’t even know it. Now, looking back at what I wrote, I feel like laughing at myself for being too naive. And I suck at poetry writing back then. So, without further ado, here’s my first love poem.

Can you hear it?
It’s the beat of my heart,
Shouting out your name.

Can you feel it?
It’s the gentle wind,
Carrying out your fragrance to me.

Can you see it?
It’s me swooning over you,
Hoping that one day you’ll see me.

It may not seem much,
But one thing remains true,
And that is I love you.

Go ahead. Laugh. I won’t mind. 🙂


Mga Puna (+add yours?)

  1. Eempee Jdl
    Jun 11, 2013 @ 09:40:34

    Hahhahah hndi ko alam you have “FRANCISCO BALAGTAS SIDES” hehehhehe. But its nice


  2. Eempee Jdl
    Jun 11, 2013 @ 09:48:00

    oo nmn follower? Around of applause for you!!


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